My comments

Hi Samantha I really enjoyed the part about the leaves, I was the same way as a kid. Every year I made sure somebody raked the leaves into a pile for me. Now that I'm older I do it for my brother and sister instead. Wonderful memories (: I can't wait to read your next piece.

Hi! I really appreciate your outlook on the way we grow older and change. It's a very interesting way to look things, I know I never would have looked at it like that.

Hey Alec! I love the way this is written I never would have thought of writing from the objects position. I appreciated the way you set it up too. I especially like the ending it was sad but happy at the same time. Wonderful ending. I look forward to reading more of your writings